Friday, April 27, 2012

Example Conclusion

Thesis: California is the number one place that I want to visit before I die.

Conclusion: California is the number one place that I want to visit before I die. California offers a diverse landscape and diverse weather, a great night life, and the opportunity to meet the cast of my favorite show, Grey's Anatomy. My uncle and aunt live there, so I have always dreamed about going to visit them. I hope I can get on a plane out there soon.

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